02-28-2017, 10:29 PM -
(02-28-2017, 08:55 PM)Clockworker Wrote: Wow.
I read the whole thing in one go and it is amazing. I didn't know you could write that well. This is great, and I wouldn't change anything, except the song ("some a little kinky"?)
;-) Thanks and ya that's why I said to ignore the song, I'm going to replace it eventually with something that actually works as a song instead of just being a poem.