The Crimson Prince (Episodes 1-4)
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05-20-2017, 08:30 PM -
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(05-16-2017, 06:20 AM)Ostinyo Wrote: Alright I went ahead and finished up episode 4 right quick for you. I'll probably go through the draft later and change a bit of stuff, but you can let me know what you think of this for now. Smile

Thanks for reading!

I read it, was very nice (as always).  All I noticed was a few spelling errors or something off (I can't pinpoint where, I just remember seeing some).

i forgot like half the characters so i had to re-read :^(
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The Crimson Prince (Episodes 1-4) - by Ostinyo - 02-28-2017, 03:14 AM
RE: Manoyama Files - Episode 1 - by Clockworker - 02-28-2017, 08:55 PM
RE: Manoyama Files - Episode 1 - by Ostinyo - 02-28-2017, 10:29 PM
RE: Manoyama Files - Episode 1 - by Communism - 02-28-2017, 10:35 PM
RE: Manoyama Files - Episode 1 - by Padillac - 02-28-2017, 10:41 PM
RE: Manoyama Files - Episode 1 - by Ostinyo - 02-28-2017, 11:40 PM
RE: Manoyama Files - Episode 1 - by Ostinyo - 03-27-2017, 03:43 PM
RE: Manoyama Files - Episode 1 - by Communism - 03-27-2017, 05:08 PM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-3) - by Ostinyo - 04-04-2017, 04:03 PM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-3) - by Communism - 04-04-2017, 09:38 PM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-3) - by Communism - 04-24-2017, 12:07 PM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-3) - by Ostinyo - 04-24-2017, 02:22 PM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-3) - by Communism - 04-24-2017, 02:42 PM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-3) - by Ostinyo - 04-24-2017, 03:04 PM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-3) - by Communism - 04-24-2017, 03:11 PM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-3) - by Ostinyo - 04-24-2017, 05:40 PM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-3) - by Communism - 05-15-2017, 08:56 PM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-4) - by Ostinyo - 05-16-2017, 06:20 AM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-4) - by Communism - 05-20-2017, 08:30 PM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-4) - by Ostinyo - 05-21-2017, 01:43 AM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-4) - by Communism - 05-21-2017, 08:16 PM
RE: Manoyama Files (Episodes 1-4) - by Ostinyo - 05-21-2017, 10:52 PM

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