Manoyama Adventures ◇ Turn 8 on Page 21!

So Hiro and Kiko are just extra characters you made for no reason?

You're going to have to remove Tamai and make the noble just Hitojo Yoshiwara. Only the Tamai family (Hotagi royalty) has that as their last name.

Here's the "Final Drafts" of my two best character apps

Name: Hitojo "Hito" Yoshiwara
Gender: Male
Home City: Fortuka
Background: Noble
Allegiance: None 
Personality: Greedy, selfish, immoral bastard who just wants power and to be as strong as possible. His family runs one of the largest banks in the country, and they (his father especially) has lots of connections to corporations in the region, and are associates of the Tamai monarchy. These connections allow the Yoshiwara Family to have a lot of power despite not being corporate, military, or political leaders. Despite being too autistic to be charismatic or too weak to be a s t r o n k Bulk Bogan, he can do his convincing and heart-snatching with his money.
Motivation: He just also wants to learn magic to use to consolidate even more power in the nation. 

Name: Akihiko "Aki" Fujushina
Gender: Male
Home City: Intika
Background: Poor
Allegiance: Union of Workers
Personality: Has more angst than a school shooter due to years of class oppression and being at the bottom of society, not cared for. This is why he joined the Union of Workers, he wants a workers revolution. Has muscles and strength from his factory work. Very charismatic, persuasive, and romantic, and can easily get a girlfriend or side hoe despite being poor and all that.
Motivation: He wants to learn magic to help aid in the worker's revolution and to break the socio-economic barriers of magic academies