Criminal Business
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The Hoff


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01-13-2018, 08:58 PM -
(01-13-2018, 05:04 PM)Communism Wrote: escort him
(idk what to write for the first part of this mission)

7:23PM, Mountain Daylight Time.

You safely escort the posse to the garage.

Everyone exits their cars and vans.

Brandon: This should be safe...

He motions everyone else to follow him to a back entrance to the garage.

One peek inside and suddenly Brandon is frozen. He very slowly opens the door to reduce noise. It leads to an office, with windows overseeing the rest of the garage.

Inside, atleast five marines surround the humvee. A man in dirty overalls and carrying a toolbox, persumably the mechanic, is talking to who appears to be a sergeant of the small group of marines.

Mumbled bits of the conversation can be heard.

"- Haggard, eh?"

"Fucking rogue-"
"Did ISIS fucking get to him?"
"No, its those Jewish punks who got to him!"
"Fucking Jews, Hitler should have-"
"SHUT YOUR MOUTH SOLDIER OR I WILL LIGHT YOU UP LIKE A BUNDLE OF GRENADES IN A STADIUM!"
"Sarge, that's too fucking soon!"
"Now what was I saying? Oh, right."
"You fucking heard him Seiverd, Kraut Nazi-wannabe."
"Oh shut the fuck up, Dale."
"Thank you, Allen!"
"That's sir to you, PFC Allen, PFC Seiverd!"
"How cute, Private Zachary."
"As the Corporal, I want all of you to shut the fuck up, let the Sarge speak, and stay alert."

"$100,000 for you to take that humvee? And for me to snitch out Brad?"
"And free admission to West Point, all expenses paid! No need to be stuck slowly dying poor in a garage! It's an offer you can't refuse, maggot!"
"Yea sure. Take that damn thing out of here."

Everyone on your side gets into position for an ambush.
Due to Angela being weakened from the Euromarket heist, the Black Marine, a trained medic, heals her.

YOUR SIDE:
Angela
  • HP: 100/100
  • AP: 30/50 (50% damage reduction)
  • Equipped Weapon: AK47 (2330/120 7.62 rounds)
  • Holstered: Golden Desert Eagle (99/45 .50 rounds)
CM Bodyguard 1 
  • HP: 100/100
  • AP: 50/50 [b](50% damage reduction)[/b]
  • Equipped Weapon: AK47 (2330/120 7.62 rounds)
  • Holstered: FN FiveSeven (2020/100 5.7 rounds)
CM Bodyguard 2 
  • HP: 100/100
  • AP: 50/50 [b](50% damage reduction)[/b]
  • Equipped Weapon: AK47 (2330/120 7.62 rounds)
  • Holstered: FN FiveSeven (2020/100 5.7 rounds)
CM Bodyguard 3 
  • HP: 100/100
  • AP: 50/50 [b](50% damage reduction)[/b]
  • Equipped Weapon: AK47 (2330/120 7.62 rounds)
  • Holstered: FN FiveSeven (2020/100 5.7 rounds)
Brandon 
  • HP: 150/150
  • AP: 100/100 [b](50% damage reduction)[/b]
  • Equipped Weapon: M4A1 (3030/120 5.56 rounds)
  • Holstered: Colt Python (66/18 .357 rounds)
  • Inventory: 2 Frag Grenades
White Sarge 
  • HP: 100/100
  • AP: 75/75 [b](50% damage reduction)[/b]
  • Equipped Weapon: M4A1 (3030/120 5.56 rounds)
  • Holstered: USP (1212/90 .45 ACP rounds)
  • Inventory: 5 Flashbangs
Black Marine
  • HP: 100/100
  • AP: 75/75 [b](50% damage reduction)[/b]
  • Equipped Weapon: XM1014 (88/40 .12 gauge shells)
  • Holstered: USP (1212/90 .45 ACP rounds)
  • Inventory: 7 Medipacks
MILITARY:
Corporal
  • HP: 100/100
  • AP: 75/75 [b](50% damage reduction)[/b]
  • Equipped Weapon: M16 (?25/? 5.56 shells)
  • Holstered: ?
  • Inventory: ?
"Allen"
  • HP: 100/100
  • AP: 75/75 [b](50% damage reduction)[/b]
  • Equipped Weapon: M4A1 (?30/? 5.56 shells)
  • Holstered: ?
  • Inventory: ?
"Zachary"
  • HP: 100/100
  • AP: 75/75 [b](50% damage reduction)[/b]
  • Equipped Weapon: M16 (?25/? 5.56 shells)
  • Holstered: ?
  • Inventory: ?
"Dale"
  • HP: 100/100
  • AP: 75/75 [b](50% damage reduction)[/b]
  • Equipped Weapon: M4A1 (?30/? 5.56 shells)
  • Holstered: ?
  • Inventory: ?
"Seiverd"
  • HP: 100/100
  • AP: 75/75 [b](50% damage reduction)[/b]
  • Equipped Weapon: Mossberg 500 (?8/? .12 gauge shells)
  • Holstered: ?
  • Inventory: ?
Sarge
  • HP: 150/150
  • AP: 100/100 [b](50% damage reduction)[/b]
  • Equipped Weapon: MP5 (?30/? 5.7 rounds)
  • Holstered: ?
  • Inventory: ?
Mechanic
  • HP: 30/30
  • AP: 0/0
  • Equipped Weapon: Power Drill (basically a weaker version of a chainsaw)
  • Holstered: A bunch of tools
MELEE WEAPON DISCOVERED
Power Drill
Damage: 2
Accuracy: 100%
Rate of Fire: determined by dice out of [damage needed to kill/2]
Armor Penetration: 3
Special Traits: Can break most non-metallic materials and weak metallic materials.

The Black Marine takes another look inside then quickly repulses his head away.

Black Marine: (whisper) "Hooooly shit. I'm not sure about that."

Brandon: (whisper) "Fucking SELLOUT! I'M GOING IN!"

The White Sarge stops Brandon from entering the garage.

White Sarge (whisper): "Hold up. We don't want to get the entire military's attention. There's probably another way."

Angela (whisper): "We have to hurry! It seems like they are going to leave soon!"

The humvee leaves the garage in 2 updates. Make a quick decision, and decide extremely wisely.

MISSION OBJECTIVE COMPLETED: Escort Brandon to his friend's garage in Mesa.
Current Mission Objectives:
- Retrieve the humvee and safely take it to a base of Brandon's fellow ex-marine criminals in Payson.
- DO NOT LOSE BRANDON.
BL_ID: 42057

hello. if you happened to come back to this dead forum to re-read my forum games, i.e. The Vigilante, Infinity Tower, Criminal Business (for nostalgia?), you are out of luck. I saved each game to my computer in PDF form. Needless to say, these forum games are probably deleted. However, if you pm me on Discord (Oh shit, he#4107), I might be able to give them to you.

Why?
1. too much references to stuff close IRL friends or family will understand.
2. shit writing
3. a few things in CB prob put me on a list

So yeah.


Messages In This Thread
Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 08-14-2017, 11:08 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by The Hoff - 09-14-2017, 09:38 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by Communism - 09-14-2017, 08:38 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by The Hoff - 09-15-2017, 06:02 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by Communism - 09-15-2017, 08:30 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by The Hoff - 09-15-2017, 11:37 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by Communism - 09-17-2017, 02:13 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by The Hoff - 09-19-2017, 09:18 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by The Hoff - 09-22-2017, 10:15 AM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by Communism - 09-22-2017, 05:55 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by The Hoff - 09-23-2017, 01:01 AM
RE: Criminal Business - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 01-07-2018, 12:12 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by Communism - 01-07-2018, 01:26 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 01-07-2018, 03:18 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by Communism - 01-07-2018, 05:29 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 01-08-2018, 12:56 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by Communism - 01-08-2018, 01:02 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 01-08-2018, 01:39 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by Communism - 01-08-2018, 02:19 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 01-09-2018, 06:08 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 01-08-2018, 01:41 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 01-08-2018, 07:04 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Let the Past Die] - by The Hoff - 01-13-2018, 08:58 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 06-22-2018, 10:08 PM

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