Criminal Business
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The Hoff


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08-22-2017, 08:47 PM -
#51
(08-22-2017, 09:38 AM)Skeletal¹²³™ Wrote: Switch the captives.
Ask them more questions.
If they don't respond then kick them in their balls once. (try to not kill them)

The captives were switched. Now John is interrogating the Loranzio, and Bronzo is dealing with Armand the Romanian.

John: So the coke. What about it?

Loranzio: It's coke. What do you mean?

John kicks the Loranzio in the balls. He lets out a cacophonous squeal of pain. 

John: Where. Did. It. Come from? I'm not playing games.

John fires his Mateba revolver somewhere near the Loranzio, intending not to shoot him, as a show of force.

The Loranzio attempts to inch his way to John's gun. That is when John kicks the chair, tipping it.

John holsters the Mateba.

Loranzio: What was the question?

John: WHERE DID THE COKE COME FROM?

Loranzio: We...we made it! In a coke farm in Tucson!

John: Oh... really now? One of the Luccis were saying that the coke got stolen from THEM.

Loranzio: What? What coke? We never raided drug farms! Ever! We the Loranzios wanted to be self-sufi-

John fires his Mateba at a stray hand of the Loranzio.

Accuracy: 30% (30 and below for the shot to land)
Roll: 34


The arm didn't get shot, but it did give the Loranzio a good jumpscare as he jumped in the chair he is tied to.

Loranzio: FUCK YOU!

John freezes for a second, than prepares a match.

John: You wanna say that shit to my face again? Huh?

Loranzio: .......

The Loranzio is silent. John blows the match, drops it on the ground, and splashes him with cold water again. He wakes up again.

John: Tell me the truth, and you will live. Is it true that the Loranzios raided the Luccis' coke farm?

Loranzio: Maybe....

John whips him 5 times.

John: ITS A FUCKING YES OR NO QUESTION!

Loranzio: YES! YES!

John: Very well.

Silence...

John: AND WHY WERE YOU FUCKS RAIDING US FOR THE DRUGS?

Loranzio: I wasn't told why.

John: Very funny buddy. WHY? COME ON, YOU ARE AT MY MERCY! WHY?

John whips him 5 more times.

Loranzio: BECAUSE FUCK YOU!

John had enough. He aims the Mateba at the Loranzio's head, ready to end his miserable life once and for all.

John: You have one last chance. WHY?

Loranzio: Because.... JUST FUCKING SHOOT ME! I AIN'T TELLING YOU! I KNOW YOU WON'T PULL THAT DAMN TRIGGER! DON'T BE A PUSSY! PULL IT!

John: Very well.

John pulls the trigger.

Accuracy: 30%
Roll: 77

The bullet did not hit the part of the head that would have killed him. Instead, it strayed towards his arm.

Captured Loranzio's HP: 30/100 (whip deals 1 damage + mateba shot)

John: This piece of crap can't aim. But when it does, you are in for a world of hurt. You got lucky. I am sure you won't be lucky next time I shoot this thing. Why were you raiding the Luccis for their coke?

Loranzio: We were running out of money. The arms trade appeared to be less and less favorable. Basically everything is going downhill... but not the drug market. There's...... white gold, grass, and needles of glory every.... *cough* where. Don Loranzio was desperate for money to keep the Loranzio family rich yet self-sufficient, that he started to enter the drug market... but we didn't have any drug assets, so we raided the Lucci's coke farm.... all the way down south in Tucson, and brought the coke here to be sold.

John: Well. Congratulations. You are free... for now. That wasn't so hard was it?

Loranzio: Fuck you....

John holsters his Mateba, takes out his tazer, and tazes the Loranzio.

Loranzio: AAAAgh! Ok fine I will stop dissing you....

John goes to the room that Bronzo was in, when he notices Bronzo and Armand brawling. The chair that Armand sat on had cut ropes.

(08-22-2017, 09:02 AM)Communism Wrote: Ok finally back

 Go upstairs and peek up there
If there's people shooting at my friends gun them down

also where is the gang creation application thing or whatever??? i'm not seeing it

fuck nvm

Dimitri looks upstairs. He sees nothing.

So he climbs up the stairs, and as soon as he is at the second floor, multiple gunshots phase across his face. He looks to his right to see two Ukrainian Bratva soldats with strange pistols firing at him. The bodies of his two other comrades are next to them.
This post was last modified: 08-22-2017, 08:57 PM by The Hoff.
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hello. if you happened to come back to this dead forum to re-read my forum games, i.e. The Vigilante, Infinity Tower, Criminal Business (for nostalgia?), you are out of luck. I saved each game to my computer in PDF form. Needless to say, these forum games are probably deleted. However, if you pm me on Discord (Oh shit, he#4107), I might be able to give them to you.

Why?
1. too much references to stuff close IRL friends or family will understand.
2. shit writing
3. a few things in CB prob put me on a list

So yeah.


Messages In This Thread
Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 08-14-2017, 11:08 PM
RE: Criminal Business [HUGE OP UPDATE] - by The Hoff - 08-22-2017, 08:47 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by The Hoff - 09-14-2017, 09:38 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by Communism - 09-14-2017, 08:38 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by The Hoff - 09-15-2017, 06:02 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by Communism - 09-15-2017, 08:30 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by The Hoff - 09-15-2017, 11:37 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by Communism - 09-17-2017, 02:13 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by The Hoff - 09-19-2017, 09:18 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by The Hoff - 09-22-2017, 10:15 AM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by Communism - 09-22-2017, 05:55 PM
RE: Criminal Business [Diplomacy] - by The Hoff - 09-23-2017, 01:01 AM
RE: Criminal Business - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 01-07-2018, 12:12 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by Communism - 01-07-2018, 01:26 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 01-07-2018, 03:18 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by Communism - 01-07-2018, 05:29 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 01-08-2018, 12:56 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by Communism - 01-08-2018, 01:02 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 01-08-2018, 01:39 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by Communism - 01-08-2018, 02:19 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 01-09-2018, 06:08 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 01-08-2018, 01:41 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 01-08-2018, 07:04 PM
RE: Criminal Business - by The Hoff - 06-22-2018, 10:08 PM

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