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04-28-2017, 09:05 PM -
#91
(04-25-2017, 09:55 PM)The Hoff Wrote: C,.,.,.,.,.,
yh hold on let me do the thing

You power up your ship, rushing to the aid of those affected by the blast.  You notice the freighters launch off a few pods full of people, and the refueling station suddenly detaches the fuel of the station, leaving it to burn up.  The most heavily damaged freighter is still falling to the surface of the nearby planet.

It seemed fitting to go for the one closest to the surface, so the heavily damaged freighter is first on the list.  Men scatter into cargo containers and others scramble for working escape pods.  A chunk of the freighter splits off and boosts off of the falling craft.  Cargo containers full of men are brought with it, being delivered to the station so the men and cargo inside do not get harmed in any way other than how they already are.  The pods launch off with a loud bang in an other wise quiet area, rocketing off to your ship to dock and release the victims of the explosion into your ship for shelter.  As the second to last pod docks, the ship starts to burn up into the atmosphere.

You head for the next freighter, hopefully this one goes a bit better, albeit less time to get men off.  All of the escape pods are rocketed off to the station but the cargo containers remain.  The pad that boosted off of the other freighter is trapped by a chunk of metal lodged into the hull.  Air is spewing out of the ship, causing the ship to start to fracture down the center of itself.  You try to grab a few containers with the arm on the ship, but once the arm unlocks, the pad boosts up a bit, loosening the metal piece.  You extend the arm to the chunk of metal and tear it off of the ship, launching it to the jettisoned fuel tank accidentally.  The pad launches off towards the station and as it docks, the explosion of the fuel tank rocks the ship into the atmosphere of the planet.

Luckily and also unluckily, the explosion rocks the remaining piece of the station away from the planet, but damages it in the process.  You are able to get everyone off of the station before it breaks apart.

You dock with the station and release the passengers onto the station, hoping for them to find somewhere else to live or work.

A small ship, lined with leechpods, a type of escape pod used to melt through an enemies hull and break into the ship to take over it, arrives.  It pulls closely to your ship and congratulates you for saving the men, but something feels a bit off with how they are speaking.  They start to FTL away from the station.

What do you do?
A.  Follow the ship.
B.  Stay at the station.
C.  Return to the warship.
D.  Take remaining supplies and;
   Da.  Keep them for yourself.
   Db.  Give them to the station.
   Dc.  Send them to the Genesis Warship.
E.  Other, explain.

I fucking hate writers block btw, sucks dick.  Mostly the reason for why I didn't update because I ran out of ideas and just didn't want to write anything for this.  I also added a poll to this post, kinda want to see if you guys are liking this so far and if my writing is good.  If you think I should do something different tell me, I'll try to incorporate your ideas for my writing and whatnot.

thank you for reading this
This post was last modified: 04-28-2017, 09:28 PM by Communism. Edit Reason: cant add polls to original post, just tell me what to do in your post i guess
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fuck my thinking emoji doesnt work - by Communism - 02-27-2017, 01:48 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by sherif - 02-27-2017, 04:12 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 02-28-2017, 05:33 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 02-27-2017, 06:01 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 02-28-2017, 05:07 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 02-28-2017, 08:41 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 02-28-2017, 08:59 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 02-28-2017, 10:58 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-01-2017, 12:23 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 02-28-2017, 10:15 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 02-28-2017, 05:25 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by sherif - 02-28-2017, 06:03 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 02-28-2017, 08:33 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 03-01-2017, 09:24 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-01-2017, 09:30 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 03-01-2017, 09:32 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-01-2017, 09:40 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 03-01-2017, 10:03 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-01-2017, 10:59 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 03-01-2017, 01:14 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 03-01-2017, 06:52 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-01-2017, 07:06 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 03-01-2017, 09:54 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-01-2017, 10:11 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 03-02-2017, 05:45 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 03-02-2017, 08:20 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-02-2017, 10:31 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 03-02-2017, 11:40 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-02-2017, 11:59 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 03-02-2017, 01:06 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-02-2017, 01:36 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 03-02-2017, 03:55 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-02-2017, 11:40 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 03-03-2017, 05:58 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-03-2017, 07:53 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 03-03-2017, 09:23 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-04-2017, 01:20 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-03-2017, 01:16 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-03-2017, 09:08 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-04-2017, 04:05 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-04-2017, 06:25 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-04-2017, 07:19 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-04-2017, 02:49 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-04-2017, 02:59 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 03-04-2017, 08:31 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-04-2017, 03:31 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-04-2017, 04:11 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-04-2017, 05:02 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-04-2017, 05:11 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-05-2017, 06:06 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-05-2017, 06:19 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-05-2017, 06:26 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-05-2017, 06:32 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-05-2017, 07:04 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-05-2017, 07:12 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-06-2017, 03:03 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-07-2017, 10:54 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 03-04-2017, 10:46 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 03-04-2017, 05:16 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 03-07-2017, 07:56 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-07-2017, 11:21 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-07-2017, 11:25 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-07-2017, 12:45 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-08-2017, 11:16 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-08-2017, 11:25 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-08-2017, 12:48 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-08-2017, 01:51 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-08-2017, 02:51 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-10-2017, 01:22 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-10-2017, 01:41 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-11-2017, 03:21 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-11-2017, 03:50 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-11-2017, 08:02 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-11-2017, 09:56 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 03-07-2017, 11:30 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 03-07-2017, 07:57 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-07-2017, 08:06 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 03-08-2017, 01:20 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 03-24-2017, 02:46 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 03-25-2017, 03:24 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 04-07-2017, 09:51 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 04-09-2017, 08:46 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 04-09-2017, 11:28 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 04-10-2017, 12:05 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 04-12-2017, 05:27 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 04-24-2017, 12:21 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 04-09-2017, 11:33 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 04-24-2017, 01:01 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 04-25-2017, 12:18 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 04-29-2017, 11:02 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 04-25-2017, 09:55 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 04-28-2017, 09:05 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 04-29-2017, 09:51 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 05-01-2017, 06:30 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 05-01-2017, 10:26 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 05-01-2017, 11:53 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 05-01-2017, 12:36 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 05-02-2017, 07:24 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 05-03-2017, 05:03 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 05-04-2017, 07:50 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Hoff - 05-03-2017, 06:39 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 05-04-2017, 10:03 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by I'm_Gay.avi2 - 05-04-2017, 10:17 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 05-04-2017, 10:18 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 05-05-2017, 10:07 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 05-06-2017, 09:16 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 05-06-2017, 01:34 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 05-07-2017, 10:13 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 05-07-2017, 03:43 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 05-07-2017, 01:55 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 05-09-2017, 02:23 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 05-10-2017, 01:01 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 05-13-2017, 06:29 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 05-10-2017, 01:51 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Skeletal¹²³™ - 05-16-2017, 03:25 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 05-22-2017, 09:34 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 06-06-2017, 03:22 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 06-06-2017, 09:55 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by Communism - 06-06-2017, 10:30 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis - by The Genghis Khan - 06-06-2017, 10:56 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis (back again) - by The Hoff - 06-27-2017, 01:33 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis (back again) - by Communism - 06-29-2017, 03:40 AM
RE: [GAME] Genesis (over sry) - by Communism - 07-05-2017, 03:22 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis (over sry) - by Communism - 07-20-2017, 09:43 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis (actually back) - by Communism - 08-07-2017, 09:26 PM
RE: [GAME] Genesis (actually back) - by Communism - 08-13-2017, 04:03 PM

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